Sunday, January 21, 2007

Sunday Scribblings 1/21/07 Fantasy


Found in the cellar
Among dreams and dust
Next to hopes and plans
The desires of different
Away from what’s known
Saving sanity from departure

You have it within.


desert rat said...

I like those first two lines, "Found in the cellar
Among dreams and dust". Nicely summed up in just a few words.

(P.S. I think you might be missing an "n" at the end of the 5th line).

Raven said...

Thank you DR. I fixed it.

Glad you enjoyed the work.

Inconsequential said...

excellent short,

and I agree with Desert Rat, 1st 2 lines are gold.