FantasyFound in the cellarAmong dreams and dustNext to hopes and plansThe desires of differentAway from what’s knownSaving sanity from departureYou have it within.
I like those first two lines, "Found in the cellarAmong dreams and dust". Nicely summed up in just a few words. (P.S. I think you might be missing an "n" at the end of the 5th line).
Thank you DR. I fixed it. Glad you enjoyed the work.
excellent short,and I agree with Desert Rat, 1st 2 lines are gold.
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