Fantasy
Found in the cellar
Among dreams and dust
Next to hopes and plans
The desires of different
Away from what’s known
Saving sanity from departure
You have it within.
Sunday, January 21, 2007
Sunday Scribblings 1/21/07 Fantasy
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3 comments:
I like those first two lines, "Found in the cellar
Among dreams and dust". Nicely summed up in just a few words.
(P.S. I think you might be missing an "n" at the end of the 5th line).
Thank you DR. I fixed it.
Glad you enjoyed the work.
excellent short,
and I agree with Desert Rat, 1st 2 lines are gold.
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